A still-dark morn, I awaken to an early dawn
for the sun to watch it rise -
I turn to see your sleeping form
and realize
as I always do when gazing at you,
that all I truly need to see
is adrift in the ocean of your loving eyes.
Without you, I have but
unfinished joys and the incompleted noise
of our laughter and delight,
or the sorrows when we fight.
But always, I remain at your pleasure
my dearest treasure,
these are days I share with you
the tenderness
a soft surprising kiss -
Like one sunrise into another,
I will follow you
and no other.
Come my love, awake and watch with me.
csr
NOTE: Proud to say this way just chosen for publication by poetry.com in their latest edition "Immortal Verses". May seem paltry to some, feels good to me!
6 comments:
what a lovely poem luddie
TreesRGreen78
very thought provoking and loving. B. Lynne
This is very beautiful, Cath! The feelings you express go way beyond the surface of a one night stand and delve deeply into your heart and soul. It was interesting to me that you wrote about this person as "sleeping" - a place where we are most vulnerable, sweet, soft and almost precious. There is definitely love between these two people - a connection that probably does not happen real often. You have used words to generate real feelings and they reach out to me from your journal and take my hand. I will be glad to "watch with you". Thank you.
Gem
Absolutely Awesome
Beautiful, awesome, brilliant..i can't say enough!!
Great stuff,
Lv Stevie
xxxxx
great poem Kathy!
love,natalie
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